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1. Tired
by Amanda J CobbI try to write
something true
but my soul is tired
and all that comes
are these pebbles of words
falling silent to the floor. 09/01/2012 Posted on 09/02/2012
Copyright © 2024 Amanda J Cobb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/02/12 at 10:35 PM As a fellow poet and writer, sure can relate to this one, Amanda. Excllent use of metaphor. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 09/03/12 at 06:53 AM the image of pebbles falling silent to the floor is perfect - isn't it frustrating when you have something to say but the words will not translate from brain to paper? beautiful piece - all artists, creators, writers can relate to this one! |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/04/12 at 10:57 PM All my artistic outlets are on this course, too. I feel this to the bone. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/08/12 at 06:04 PM Happy POTD...a worthy poem, that sinks into the mind, and is inspiring, even as it searches for that inspiration itself. Nice. Thanks. |
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