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Circular Sin Tax

by Laura Doom


[aka Syntactical Withdrawal]

08/16/2012

Posted on 08/16/2012
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/16/12 at 11:43 PM

*stellar* :)

Posted by Jim Benz on 08/17/12 at 03:02 PM

ahh, the random poem, filled with dubious drifting drunks, draughts, and drones. I enjoyed every reading, no matter how it mutated.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/17/12 at 07:23 PM

There is great effort in this madness. One can only smile at how you have so cleverly put words together. In one glance, pure gibberish, but upon closer inspection, a universe of rational ideas.

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/19/12 at 02:53 PM

I enjoy a good puzzle-poem; it's another excellent deconstruction you've got here :)

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