by Philippa Jane
from the peak the city below is
a murky sea, places and passersby
lost in the swell.
i come up for air.
oh, to expel it all in one breath!
to disturb the mountains
Posted on 08/05/2012
Copyright © 2020 Philippa Jane
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/06/12 at 06:30 PM|
Profound capture Philippa. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings, but hits much close to home. I can really empathize with this piece in how it captures the human condition.
|Posted by Linda Fuller on 05/11/20 at 05:28 PM|
I like the double hit I get from the last two lines.