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avalanche
by Philippa Janefrom the peak the city below is
a murky sea, places and passersby
lost in the swell.
i come up for air.
oh, to expel it all in one breath!
to disturb the mountains
and matter. 08/05/2012 Posted on 08/05/2012
Copyright © 2024 Philippa Jane
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/06/12 at 06:30 PM Profound capture Philippa. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings, but hits much close to home. I can really empathize with this piece in how it captures the human condition. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 05/11/20 at 05:28 PM I like the double hit I get from the last two lines. |
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