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Skeletons have humans in their closets.

by Jolie Jordan

Step back five years
I am 20, folding my palms in half
as you enter me
and my eyes pop.

Now twenty-five,
and every minute spent
not tearing eachother apart
is a victory.

It is my decision now
that you don't even know I'm making.

Do I swallow this up?
just to live with what I can
and forget what I cannot;
we'll just make better mistakes tomorrow.

Or should I just cover
my face in wet palms?
I can't operate
this stuck throat
and these salty lips
like you can.

I'm desperate
and you're a disconnect;
So let's be honest

The 'we'
is always
only me
wishing I had more.

06/28/2012

Posted on 06/28/2012
Copyright © 2025 Jolie Jordan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 06/28/12 at 06:54 PM

You certainly deserve some liberation. We should call in the National Guard.

Posted by Gregory R Schelske on 06/28/12 at 09:38 PM

Oh wow. Wow. This is raw, honest and beautifully brutal. Well done!

Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 06/28/12 at 11:01 PM

While I enjoyed the poem, the line "we'll just make better mistakes tomorrow" grabbed me like a magnet. A hidden kernel of wisdom there.

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 12/08/12 at 09:09 PM

You never disappoint, no matter how disappointed you sound.

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