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Festivall Haiku
by A. Paige White
Smoke on the water
Fire breathing festivall
Chili cook off
06/17/2012 Author's Note: Dedicated to Six Hundred Pounds of Sin's
rendition of "Sixteen Tons" and
"Fire on the Mountain" at yesterday's Festivall ...
Posted on 06/17/2012
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/19/12 at 03:00 PM I keep coming back to this. There is something so cool about the contrast in that first line. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/26/12 at 06:28 PM An artful and economic display of the power of using fewer words, rather than more. Nice! Thank you. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/28/12 at 02:26 PM Here's to fire in our bones, breathe on! |
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