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by Jim Benz


a thought with dark wings

an act of love

what we take for granted

at our mothers’ knees

arthritic knees

in the early morning

with nowhere else to turn

small joys

and wave upon endless wave

of disenchantment

only deepening

these chiseled outlines

between self

and other voices

narrow-hearted, without a breath

our sheltered hoaxes

curved with dreams

06/15/2012

Author's Note: meh

Posted on 06/15/2012
Copyright © 2020 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 06/15/12 at 06:21 PM

Oh yes Jim, are we not both the darkness and the light in life? Good write!!

Posted by Laura Doom on 06/16/12 at 10:46 AM

open mind surgery

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/07/12 at 07:47 PM

Much better than "meh", Jim. My favorite lines are actually the last two.

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 01/04/13 at 01:29 AM

The pacing in this is awesome. Every line fits so well.

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