| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/10/12 at 09:57 PM This is full of tomorrow, like the best futures are. I love it! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/10/12 at 11:11 PM I'll drink to that. Wonderful. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/11/12 at 09:47 PM When I wished I'd written it myself is the only thing I can say, then it is enough said. That last stanza is simply magnificent, George. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/12/12 at 12:20 PM these words finds you at your most tender, George. Your ode is divining a rod to locate tears, which I have shed through the years, which are deeply immersed in the ages and I hope you don't mind, my friend, if I shed an ample amount here on this page. |
| Posted by Peter Hsu on 06/22/12 at 05:00 PM Even in my short years, this reverberates through my memory and shakes out the names and faces I tried to bury out of a sense of shame. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 06/27/12 at 07:33 PM I love stanza 3, I have been on both ends of that one I am sure! This is just so eloquent.
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| Posted by Anne Di Baguette on 08/09/12 at 09:33 PM Heartfelt. The simple sincerity of this, for me, makes the reality cut ever deeper. |
