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May Birthdays

by Kristina Woodhill

Pine tree May candles
Lit at their base with bright yellow pollen wishes
Waiting for wind to blow them out

05/25/2012

Posted on 05/25/2012
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 05/25/12 at 03:35 PM

Pretty :) I enjoyed this!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 05/25/12 at 04:13 PM

Loved this too! "STELLER!"

Posted by Laura Doom on 06/02/12 at 10:22 AM

pine and wish for dissonance...

Posted by Laura Doom on 06/05/12 at 10:36 AM

Typically bleak comment above; entirely incongruous with your celebration. On reflection, pines play host to parties of firecrests, prompting a revised crescendo of appreciation for your high notes here...

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/06/12 at 06:51 PM

Oh yes...I must agree with Clara Mae, indeed "stellar"! Thanks.

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