Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/18/12 at 05:52 PM I never fear for your safety, good sir. Fantastic, nightmarish and well done. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 05/18/12 at 09:23 PM Is there really a 'cure' for PTSD |
Posted by George Hoerner on 05/18/12 at 09:25 PM sorry it posted incomplete. Or is PTSD something like life with the only cure coming at the end? Good write!! |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 05/21/12 at 03:53 PM Feels like a real glimpse into you, my friend. Gabe is right, nightmarish and very well done. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/02/12 at 12:29 PM Thankfully, I've never had to face the kind of combat that inspired this. None the less I admire the honesty of this piece, in how it delves into the world of the "vet," and PTSD. Excellent rhyming and cadence also, helps deliver the message. |
Posted by Kerowyn Rose on 08/02/12 at 11:25 PM Your rhythm and word play add to the texture and tone of your subject very well. This is a great write. Thanks for sharing! |