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reason is not in control, her

by Elizabeth Jill




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                    t h e          s m a l l          g a t h e r m o r e     


                    o n     t h e     s i d e o f t h e r o a d w a y


                    f a l s e s p r i n g     i n t h e     a i r 


                    l o o k           m o t h e r n a t u r e     i s 



                    s h a k i n g     h e r     h a i r     



                    s p l i t t i n g e n d s

                                         


03/08/2012

Posted on 03/08/2012
Copyright © 2019 Elizabeth Jill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/08/12 at 04:30 PM

I like the style of this poem, and the graphic. I've been into writing poems with graphics lately myself. Maybe it's the split ends in the air. Love this Jill!!

Posted by Mo Couts on 03/08/12 at 07:57 PM

I feel like the graphic pulls this together WONDERFULLY and makes me yearn for more. Beautiful picture and beautiful words together are a winning combination; nicely done.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 03/08/12 at 08:56 PM

THANK YOU JILL! I love love LOVE THIS!!!!!!!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/08/12 at 11:54 PM

Ho! As if she'd accept any combing. Love this.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/09/12 at 02:02 PM

You never fail to impress me with your style- the picture enhances the words, and visa- versa.

Posted by Laura Doom on 03/14/13 at 05:47 PM

...and synthesizing means for us to be consumed...

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