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The Wind And I

by Joan Serratelli

It looked nice,
The sun was out
I was bored
and these 4 walls
suddenly closed in
on me

I ate lunch,
put my coat on
and ventured out
It was fine...
until I went
down the steps

The wind nearly took
my breath away
Instead of going
back to the house
I put my hands
in my pockets
and walked
up the street

I guess I walked
about a quarter mile
I turned back
and came home

But it felt really
good...
like I had just done
something
wonderful
I feel better
I don't feel trapped
I have an option
...my own two feet

02/27/2012

Author's Note: Yes, I ACTUALLY wrote this. LOL!

Posted on 02/27/2012
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 02/27/12 at 01:48 PM

That is great Joan.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/27/12 at 04:10 PM

Hey, the wind made you do it! Very good to see you outside yourself physically and poetically.

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 02/27/12 at 11:48 PM

So true and well written. I had a similar experience and took off walking just because I had legs. Walk On! Write On!

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