pathetic.org :: always keep your distance by Emily Davidson

always keep your distance

always keep
your distance and you
will be safe

but you will not please
your predator

01/05/2012

Posted on 02/25/2012
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/25/12 at 10:52 AM

...excellent.....

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/25/12 at 02:23 PM

Yes, yes!

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 02/25/12 at 09:52 PM

very true, a predator would be most displeased :P

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/26/12 at 05:08 PM

Nice bit of tension and provocative space here between these two simple thoughts.

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