Private properties by Laura DoomI've been thinking about you
in most inappropriate ways.
Nothing personal, you understand
just idle thoughts
working overtime
in search of licentious relief.
Once defrocked, you are unlocked, but still
beyond reproach, the pièce de résistance
that mocks my passion for base baroque,
the queen of arts whose purist pawn
dismisses her heartless mistresses'
squeaky sibilance as the raving
of misappropriated tarts.
I was not wanted, being burnt
at the edges, and foiled
in my desire to whisper
sweet opiates in your shell;
can you hear the syrup swell
as it fills your occipital lobe?
Or do you taste the acrid black
of midnight oil exhausted?
I've been forced to revamp my objective
and assign you an ordinate role.
I no longer subject you to intimacy;
you are upstanding
and I'm on my back
a prospect not perfectly wasted on me. 02/12/2012 Posted on 02/12/2012 Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/13/12 at 04:47 PM I love that 4th stanza. |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/13/12 at 05:35 PM "...being burnt at the edges, and foiled in my desire to whisper sweet opiates in your shell..." As always, your use of language and the way you arrange it on a page astound me!! |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/13/12 at 05:42 PM I just can't get enough of the genius that is you, your expressions. Sorry to post again, but I just read this outloud to my significant other, who appreciated your cleverness as much as I did, so I went into my favorite's list and read him the first poem of yours that I favorited..."A bad day at the orifice". Thank you for continuing to write, for continuing to post it here, and just for being exactly who you are. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/13/12 at 09:44 PM You had me at "defrocked." Beautiful and haunting as hell. |
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