| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/13/12 at 04:50 PM Quite the collection of delectable vocabulary to read aloud - dismal in the emotions it evokes, actually, but the Dust..... to dust marriage is unique and surrounds this theme in a basic deconstruction that I find clever. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/13/12 at 11:43 PM Wonderful verse, and I think I liked the visual in those first three or so lines best. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/23/12 at 02:02 AM Love this. I've been speaking it out loud. Would love to hear different people reading this at a poetry hub. |
| Posted by Angela Stevens on 05/19/12 at 09:09 PM Had to read this aloud, it made me do it! |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 05/13/14 at 04:17 AM spoken, word! |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 05/13/14 at 04:18 AM problematic romantics |
