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by Alli Martel

Beside you I mimic the sea,
all tides and currents

washing away silt and sandbar.
I am set off by moons,

the light drowning scent of salt
that covers our skins.


Posted on 02/07/2012
Copyright © 2024 Alli Martel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/07/12 at 07:58 PM

... excellent.....

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/09/12 at 04:03 AM

A well-crafted image.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/01/14 at 03:49 PM

A very fine POTD! Congrats!

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