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Reservations

by Kristina Woodhill

the visitor leaned hard
against the door jamb's
steady side,
a tall man, solid built,
his roots dug deep,
his hands spread wide;
steps he tread to get there
fluffed their dust,
puffed past impressions,
imprints tired like all he'd tried
to follow
life's conventions;
solid as he stood
the door stood equal to its task,
its roots as deeply held,
no stranger
to its towering past;
cheek to wood
the man leaned in,
rough finger tips he pressed,
willed his will,
boot traced the sill,
the oak door stilled his quest;
heart wood felt his
heart beats
travel finger tip to plank,
trembles like a soulful
earthquake,
shivers swelled and shrank;
blue jay left the berries,
house cat
fled the yard,
sun reserved
its setting
while the visitor
leaned hard

01/12/2012

Posted on 01/12/2012
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/12/12 at 08:51 PM

... excellent.....

Posted by Laura Doom on 01/15/12 at 01:01 PM

Two trees seeking one determination. In a questionably cogent moment, I heard Kipling stepping into Tolkien territory; no reservations subscribing to your rhyming scheme...

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