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January 7 2012

by Elizabeth Jill





Sunlight yawning in
Clouds wearing mountain clothing
I will hike this day





01/07/2012

Posted on 01/07/2012
Copyright © 2024 Elizabeth Jill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/07/12 at 07:19 PM

I don't know if I can find words for how this affected me!! The clouds wearing mountain clothing is just brilliant!!! Hike on!!!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/07/12 at 07:20 PM

love these "choice" words....excellent.....and motivating

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/08/12 at 05:11 AM

Perfect imagery. Purpose and action I relate to completely.

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 01/08/12 at 12:41 PM

love how you worded this imagery..

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