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December 25

by Keith D Allison

I wish I had something to munch up on
on this Christmas day
really don't have much to say
no one here anyway
Snow upon the ground
what a great day
wished I had a sleigh
I'd be on my way

But the man of the hour
has already come and gone
bells in the distance
gently ringing
should go and pray

12/25/2011

Posted on 12/25/2011
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lori Blair on 12/26/11 at 04:08 AM

So empty those ringing bells upon cold snow and no one to offer comfort..heartfelt..and well written!

Posted by Lucia Haselhorst on 12/26/11 at 07:52 PM

In the first stanza where you say: No one here anyway...wish I had a sleigh I'd be on my way. You sound venturous, go forth! I enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for sharing.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/29/11 at 03:13 AM

After surviving many, many Christmases, I doubt a better recipe can be found. Excellent Keith. Thank you.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/01/12 at 09:19 AM

Very good rhyming pattern between the first and last stanza not to mention the feel of movement in this pleasant piece! And a Happy New Year Keith!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/01/12 at 05:34 PM

This captures the essence of the season almost in a hurried way, which somehow speaks loads about how this season can overwhelm and provide meaning at the same time.

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