|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Lori Blair on 12/26/11 at 04:08 AM|
So empty those ringing bells upon cold snow and no one to offer comfort..heartfelt..and well written!
|Posted by Lucia Haselhorst on 12/26/11 at 07:52 PM|
In the first stanza where you say: No one here anyway...wish I had a sleigh I'd be on my way. You sound venturous, go forth! I enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for sharing.
|Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/29/11 at 03:13 AM|
After surviving many, many Christmases, I doubt
a better recipe can be found. Excellent Keith. Thank you.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/01/12 at 09:19 AM|
Very good rhyming pattern between the first and last stanza not to mention the feel of movement in this pleasant piece! And a Happy New Year Keith!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/01/12 at 05:34 PM|
This captures the essence of the season almost in a hurried way, which somehow speaks loads about how this season can overwhelm and provide meaning at the same time.