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In and Out

by George Hoerner

i looked out
out looked in
as i changed
my attitude
out changed too

regardless of
the sky
i could find
sun or showers

i knew if
i lived
it would be
on my terms

when i
am ready
i will go
not now

the time
must be right
it will come
there is
no doubt

12/10/2011

Posted on 12/12/2011
Copyright © 2024 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/12/11 at 09:28 AM

This poem makes sense, yet there are so many things you could be speaking of.

Posted by Lori Blair on 12/14/11 at 10:47 PM

How vulnerable we do feel to nature regardless of our years...great write!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/17/11 at 02:01 PM

A life which we could not live on our own terms but rather is dictated to us down to its last detail is no life at all, but it lacks all wonder and surprise. I am certain that this or any ode would not live lest it lived on its own terms and this one certainly does. Deep down, I know that it is not I which am penning the ode, rather the ode is penning itself and the quill, is only conduit to its flowing and is never quite in my hands, but in its own, to live, to witness the ink flow on its own terms, not mine, no matter how I deem myself a writer, I live independently of my odes, which write themselves, I am only conduit and witness and grateful that they do and that suffices.

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