| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/01/11 at 08:43 PM This is simple, but it's got your fantastical language and word play going for it. And I didn't see that last stanza coming, but after I read it, the whole poem gained new depth. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/01/11 at 08:47 PM I thought your son was about due! Congratulations and blessings to your family. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 12/01/11 at 09:08 PM CONGTATULATIONS, JC! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/11 at 10:40 PM Congratulations go without saying, and the poem just happens to be fantastic as well. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/02/11 at 12:49 AM I hope some day your son reads this piece. It is a very good write. My daughter will deliver in April and she is happy that it is a girl. It is her first and will share this poem with her. |
