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by Jim Benz


soft words
for a crown of straw
her cradlesong

12/01/2011

Author's Note: christmas ku

Posted on 12/01/2011
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/01/11 at 02:05 PM

Very nice Jim!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/11 at 04:12 PM

Awesome.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/01/11 at 04:33 PM

Ah! Brilliant. So much in so few words. Wonderful image and sentiment. Thanks, Jim.

Posted by Laura Doom on 12/04/11 at 11:58 AM

Perennial ephemerality by perspective, and many more -- for me, this encapsulates itself, poetry with both vision and insight...

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 12/11/11 at 04:14 PM

Lovely!

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