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midnight breath
by Maria Massarella
12/01/2011 Author's Note: *because i am ever fascinated by the way one month slips into the other
Posted on 12/01/2011
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/01/11 at 03:58 AM I found myself holding my breath as I waited for the next word - so lovely and clever a presentation, and a fantastic way to move from one month to the next, one moment to the next. Thank you. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/01/11 at 02:14 PM Yes, very well done m'lady. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 12/11/11 at 04:16 PM Nicely crafted, Maria. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/15/11 at 05:57 AM *happy sigh* That's what your poetry does to me. :)) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/19/11 at 04:29 PM Lovely symbolism of the changing seasons Refreshingly formatted to add to the sense of change. |
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