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haiku (streetlights)

by Pall Kvaran

the streetlights shine
emptiness on my bed
winter blues

11/27/2011

Author's Note: Courtesy of Hendrix...

Posted on 11/27/2011
Copyright © 2026 Pall Kvaran

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/27/11 at 09:33 PM

...keen ku Paul.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/28/11 at 03:54 AM

My favorite word in this is "emptiness". This is a great ku. Thank you.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/30/11 at 06:32 PM

Rock on.

Posted by Jim Benz on 12/01/11 at 01:26 PM

Of all the ku in the sukai, this was my favorite.

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