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haiku (streetlights)
by Pall Kvaranthe streetlights shine
emptiness on my bed
winter blues 11/27/2011 Author's Note: Courtesy of Hendrix...
Posted on 11/27/2011
Copyright © 2024 Pall Kvaran
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/27/11 at 09:33 PM ...keen ku Paul. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 11/28/11 at 02:50 AM Snow is within our near future in Michigan so I can relate..but you..you described that very feeling perfectly!! Excellent! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/28/11 at 03:54 AM My favorite word in this is "emptiness". This is a great ku. Thank you. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/30/11 at 06:32 PM Rock on. |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 12/01/11 at 01:26 PM Of all the ku in the sukai, this was my favorite. |
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