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Coffee shop staccato

by Dorian Black

Randomly indulgent,
wings of smoke feather
through the air.

Whispers spoken beyond
starving artist's ears.
Platitude becomes so very clear.

11/21/2011

Posted on 11/21/2011
Copyright © 2025 Dorian Black

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/21/11 at 10:00 PM

I got interesting visuals with this one :)

Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/25/11 at 05:43 PM

... outstanding... welcome to Pathetic....

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/15/12 at 04:30 PM

I like the wings of smoke feathering about, also the choice of the word "starving". That last line fills in the details nicely.

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