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Through his whiskey teeth

by Meghan Helmich

The picket signs are put to bed
just before the old man
gets plastered in the window
of the abandoned house
on Florida Avenue.

I visit only when I have something
that can be shared in tumblers
because eventually
he will start throwing the wicker around.

We light some candles
with a book of matches
from his stay on the Queen Mary
before it was just a floating hotel of spirits.

None of those pansies in the streets
has any idea what it's like
to blast a hole through the sun, he says.

He knows it's only a short stumble
to the next town
and all its promises.

11/14/2011

Posted on 11/14/2011
Copyright © 2024 Meghan Helmich

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/14/11 at 09:37 PM

A short stumble, with a hell of a first step, I'm sure. Loved this. Every single perfect image.

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 11/14/11 at 09:59 PM

the imagery here is fantastic

Posted by Sal Haefling on 11/15/11 at 02:25 PM

"before it was just a floating hotel of spirits"...reminds me of cassadaga. I really liked this one, I don't think you showed me this one yesterday.

Posted by Lori Blair on 11/28/11 at 03:42 AM

A short stumble is all he believes it to be..loved this..you depict so much more than most could convey..Excellent!

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