| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/07/11 at 10:04 PM I love the notion of the smartest strip-club in the tri-county area. Great first stanza, and it gets even better after that. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 11/08/11 at 03:10 AM I know the people who could do this together. I used to be one of them. I really like this. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 11/08/11 at 03:44 AM That third stanza pulled me in so closely and whispered in my ear "this could be about you". Thank you for your beautiful words and for not being afraid to share your talent with us; so awesome! |
| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 11/08/11 at 03:54 AM Oh man. Nothing like the vandal bubble to keep you warm in November. |
| Posted by Sal Haefling on 11/08/11 at 01:59 PM Love the visuals at the last stanza. sexxxy. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/09/11 at 06:52 PM ... excellent..... |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 02/02/15 at 09:47 AM Hell yeah! This packs a punch. Good read |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/02/15 at 08:34 PM Rebels with a cause, kind of wanting what other people have, kind of not. Nice write. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 02/03/15 at 02:07 AM Terrific poem. |
