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But is it a lie?
by Rachel SitesYou make me smile
But is it a lie?
You make me laugh
But is it a lie?
You make my heart skip a beat
But is it a lie?
You make my eyes glimmer
But is it a lie?
You make me forget to breathe
But is it a lie?
You make my knees tremble
But is it a lie?
You make the stars reachable
But is it a lie?
You make the dark side of the moon warm
But is it a lie?
You make my dreams come true
But is it a lie?
You are my world
But are you a liar? 11/07/2011 Author's Note: Rachel Sites
Posted on 11/07/2011
Copyright © 2024 Rachel Sites
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| Posted by Paganini Jones on 11/07/11 at 10:16 AM An eternal question, which only time will answer. I like your use or repetition in this - it well suits the subject matter and the circular nature of the thoughts / feelings you describe.
Welcome to Pathetic. I hope you will find your poetic home here :) |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/07/11 at 05:49 PM Well-done on the style and approach. It came out to a really nicely done bit of work. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/07/11 at 09:28 PM ... excellent... welcome to Pathetic..... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/26/12 at 06:51 PM if we feared liars we'd never reach for the stars which are the biggest liars of all, who purport to make wishes come true, but mostly make them come false. love you know it when you feel it. there is no other way to know. when you are touched by love, the touch of love renders all other touch obsolete. |
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