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Snow iii
by Jason Wardell
I know sheets
have is when tighter ,
melted the sky you
and freezes aren't
frozen and I there
again pull
over my ,
and
over
and
all
I
but
someone
better
is
.
11/02/2011 Author's Note:
so why
do my drifts
pile into the shape
of someone like you?
Posted on 11/02/2011
Copyright © 2025 Jason Wardell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 11/03/11 at 12:33 AM JASSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOONNNNNNNN. THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME. I love everything about it. The format. The poem. The author's note. Yesyesyes. Thank you. Brilliant. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/16/11 at 10:14 PM Nice work Jason. Excellent visual effect to move the words and flow steadily along and down. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 12/17/12 at 06:29 AM This poem is dripping with truth, love it, layout n all, peace n poems, jewels xo |
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