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Snow iii

by Jason Wardell


I know sheets have is when tighter , melted the sky you and freezes aren't frozen and I there again pull over my , and over and all I




but




someone




better










is

.

11/02/2011

Author's Note:
so why
do my drifts
pile into the shape
of someone like you?

Posted on 11/02/2011
Copyright © 2021 Jason Wardell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 11/03/11 at 12:33 AM

JASSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOONNNNNNNN. THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME. I love everything about it. The format. The poem. The author's note. Yesyesyes. Thank you. Brilliant.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/16/11 at 10:14 PM

Nice work Jason. Excellent visual effect to move the words and flow steadily along and down.

Posted by Julie Adams on 12/17/12 at 06:29 AM

This poem is dripping with truth, love it, layout n all, peace n poems, jewels xo

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