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On my way home

by Shannon McEwen

Rapid transit from here
To somewhere else
The fabric of life

Like a multi-coloured afghan
Sewn stitch
By loving stitch

Each seat
Carrying someone
Different

From here
To somewhere else

10/30/2011

Posted on 10/30/2011
Copyright © 2026 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/30/11 at 10:11 PM

...great thought to build--keener than keen the wording; makes it piece d' kissable as you describe humanity as we know it. touche!

Posted by Lori Blair on 11/24/11 at 03:44 PM

lovely..you express each passenger as if they are as specific as you yourself is while noting the stitching..all connected! Excellent!

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