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october mist

by Mary Frances Spencer

fogs my vision

positive ions
cool angst soothe
soul with breath balm

inhale the fresh
face fall
as leaves drop
away

stretch the bare sharp
branches up
scratch the sky

be one
silhouette
against
the moon

10/22/2011

Author's Note: Had a misty trip tonight...kinda feelin' the Halloween energies of Fall! Namaste MFS

Posted on 10/23/2011
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 10/23/11 at 01:24 PM

I can tell, nice write lady.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/23/11 at 08:46 PM

All kinds of things seem to come out of the fog, eh? Nice write.

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/24/11 at 03:38 AM

very cool image, expecially the second to last stanza

Posted by Sal Haefling on 11/04/11 at 09:06 PM

Beautiful imagery

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