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Constant chaos to get it done

by Shannon McEwen

Life continues spinning around and around
Until weary brains smack from side to side
Constantly searching for that higher ground
Life continues spinning around and around
Senses retreat and afflictions rebound
Where darker senses and misgivings abide
Life continues spinning around and around
Until weary brains smack from side to side

10/22/2011

Author's Note: A triolet

Posted on 10/23/2011
Copyright © 2019 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/23/11 at 09:55 PM

I think I've run into constant chaos before, which is to say I keep running into it. Loved this.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/14/11 at 10:00 PM

A salient observation of the human condition in too much of our present culture. Repetition very effective.

Posted by Lori Blair on 01/05/12 at 08:52 PM

I have been there..wait..I am still there..great write and you said it all amazingly so! Thanks!

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