| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/06/11 at 10:01 PM "Fluid" is definitely a word that comes to mind here. Your best work always seems to have a life and spirit of its own. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/07/11 at 01:27 AM This is a wordstream of supreme nature that only m.a could transcribe. My original observation is one of passion filled sensuality. After reading this poem several times my mind migrates to the concept of reading between the lines, then writing those words down, thereupon removing the original lines themselves creating what can only be described as mystic. I love how the true beauty of this fascinating piece shines through. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/09/11 at 02:47 PM ... so wonderful..... |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/09/11 at 04:12 PM feel like listening to Pink Floyd's "Us and Them" after this mesmerizing piece! |
| Posted by Amy Manning on 10/10/11 at 12:07 AM you don't just play with words, you bend them and tweak them till they mean what they always wanted to be |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/11/11 at 12:33 PM I "floated" along with this goreous romantic lyric, Maria |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 10/11/11 at 11:50 PM Just as beautifully written as you are Marie...lovely thank you.. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/13/11 at 02:00 AM Quite spiritual, quite ethereal, Maria. Wish I knew the word for 'beautiful' in Italian. It's like vapourous ectoplasm winding through the air. :) |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/17/11 at 06:50 PM A beautiful dance with words. Lovely! |
