|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/18/11 at 05:22 PM|
... excellent.. welcome to Pathetic.....
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/18/11 at 11:14 PM|
Sometimes indeed. Dug this a lot.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/20/11 at 07:09 PM|
One rubs sticks together to make a fire. Rubbing hands together maybe for warmth. Rubbing brain cells together to come up with a poem. Sometimes it happens!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/21/11 at 10:02 PM|
Love the clever alliteration in that last stanza. The whole thing pretty good.
|Posted by JD Clay on 09/29/11 at 12:12 AM|
Interesting use of trope, Dave. Me likes!
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/29/11 at 04:07 PM|
...easy to dance to also; a really cool piece of work.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/30/11 at 10:53 PM|
Love the use of trope.Keeps me thinking!
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/03/11 at 05:08 AM|
Heh. Definitely a stretch, but not a topple. :)
|Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/18/12 at 07:29 AM|
I particularly love the first three stanzas. Really great poem!