| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/12/11 at 08:14 PM ...outstanding! Welcome to Pathetic..... |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/18/11 at 06:41 PM sometimes I do, sometimes I don't. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/20/11 at 07:11 PM At least birds act instinctively. Not sure about groups of people. Thought provoking sentiment. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/21/11 at 09:59 PM Excellent. Well done! Neat how you've captured the two species in separate but tandem stanzas. |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 09/22/11 at 03:37 PM Percept vs. concept. Is it any wonder that conceptual thought is generally senseless? Interesting poem. As far as Quentin's comment goes, mean-spirited humans don't seem to rely on anything but instinct, even if their hostility stems from conceptual nature. |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 09/22/11 at 03:38 PM nice rhyming connection between flocking and mocking too! Is there even a difference? |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 09/27/11 at 02:20 AM reminds me a bit of Beatles poetry |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/03/11 at 05:07 AM Definitely a nice flow of thought and rhythm. Welcome to Pathetic (please forgive my tardy welcome). |
