|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/12/11 at 08:14 PM|
...outstanding! Welcome to Pathetic.....
|Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/18/11 at 06:41 PM|
sometimes I do, sometimes I don't.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/20/11 at 07:11 PM|
At least birds act instinctively. Not sure about groups of people. Thought provoking sentiment.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/21/11 at 09:59 PM|
Excellent. Well done! Neat how you've captured the two species in separate but tandem stanzas.
|Posted by Jim Benz on 09/22/11 at 03:37 PM|
Percept vs. concept. Is it any wonder that conceptual thought is generally senseless? Interesting poem. As far as Quentin's comment goes, mean-spirited humans don't seem to rely on anything but instinct, even if their hostility stems from conceptual nature.
|Posted by Jim Benz on 09/22/11 at 03:38 PM|
nice rhyming connection between flocking and mocking too! Is there even a difference?
|Posted by Alex Smyth on 09/27/11 at 02:20 AM|
reminds me a bit of Beatles poetry
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/03/11 at 05:07 AM|
Definitely a nice flow of thought and rhythm. Welcome to Pathetic (please forgive my tardy welcome).