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by David Maurice

When you look outside your window
And you see the birds are flocking
Do you wonder what
they're thinking?
Do you wonder if
they're thinking?

When you look outside you window
And you see the people mocking
Do you wonder what
they're thinking?
Do you wonder if
they're thinking?


Posted on 09/12/2011
Copyright © 2021 David Maurice

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/12/11 at 08:14 PM

...outstanding! Welcome to Pathetic.....

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/18/11 at 06:41 PM

sometimes I do, sometimes I don't.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/20/11 at 07:11 PM

At least birds act instinctively. Not sure about groups of people. Thought provoking sentiment.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/21/11 at 09:59 PM

Excellent. Well done! Neat how you've captured the two species in separate but tandem stanzas.

Posted by Jim Benz on 09/22/11 at 03:37 PM

Percept vs. concept. Is it any wonder that conceptual thought is generally senseless? Interesting poem. As far as Quentin's comment goes, mean-spirited humans don't seem to rely on anything but instinct, even if their hostility stems from conceptual nature.

Posted by Jim Benz on 09/22/11 at 03:38 PM

nice rhyming connection between flocking and mocking too! Is there even a difference?

Posted by Alex Smyth on 09/27/11 at 02:20 AM

reminds me a bit of Beatles poetry

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/03/11 at 05:07 AM

Definitely a nice flow of thought and rhythm. Welcome to Pathetic (please forgive my tardy welcome).

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