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from the beginning

by Morgan D Hafele

now don't count the kisses
there will be too many for that
don't weigh the love
because it will help you float to places
you've never known before
don't forget the past
because it helps you move forward
but don't dwell on it, or you'll get stuck
don't leave your dreams behind
together you can reach them twice as fast
in the proverbial two become one
the course may not always be clear
but together
you will always find your way

08/05/2011

Author's Note: i wrote this for a couple of friends who just got married. i read it at the reception. it was a wonderful wedding!

Posted on 08/20/2011
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/20/11 at 07:43 PM

...nicely done, a covering-of-the-bases approach; did you read this at the reception or deception, which will last forever..nahahahahahaha,i just kill me. good write morg.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/20/11 at 09:31 PM

Some really nice, sincere promise expressed in this. I have to imagine they loved it.

Posted by Mo Couts on 08/22/11 at 01:09 AM

Precious! I hope if I am ever to marry that words as sweet as these are shared for me at the special day.

Posted by Anita Mac on 08/23/11 at 10:12 PM

This is excellent! Sage advice and clear fondness for them as a couple... Very sweet, Morgs!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/25/11 at 07:15 PM

And what a great poem for all lovers! Glad I finally caught up with it. Adds to favourites.

Posted by Lori Blair on 11/24/11 at 03:48 PM

Beautiful..I would have loved to have been at that wedding to hear you read this but then I know I would have burst into tears..so true what you say and how you reach me!

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