| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/08/11 at 02:45 PM Rich, fantastic attention to language. This has such a great energy in it. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/08/11 at 03:35 PM "Splashing emerald spray pheromones" - now I know why I love the sea - I never had a chance. I like it all, especially "the tides of eden". Thank you. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/08/11 at 05:53 PM I love this, Kee...and you know how much I love the ocean....nice penning |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 10/21/11 at 05:23 PM Especially loved those final two lines..ties it in even more so..fabulous write! |
