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by Joan Serratelli

I have committed
an awful crime-
...BAD Poetry

It would be funny
(IF it was funny...
but it's not...
funny, I mean)

The sad truth
is that
Beauty is in the eye
of the beholder
....
and my poems are not
beautiful

Some are ok
Some are silly,
albeit fun
to write

I'm honest;
...painfully honest
I cry, I vent
but I manage
to "purge" a piece
or two

To me, poetry
HAS to be honest
to have any validity

My poems
are my form
of therapy
without it
....
I would not be
...me....

08/03/2011

Posted on 08/03/2011
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Razel Davies on 08/03/11 at 08:59 PM

No poem is bad unless it has no soul. In everything you write i see your soul woven deep. A great message Joan and a wonderful write.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/03/11 at 11:19 PM

Ha! I hereby condemn you to an endless supply of sharp pencils, reams of blank paper, and the spirit to keep putting yourself out there.

Posted by Mo Couts on 08/04/11 at 01:37 AM

Awesome, Joan. The best poems are the ones that expose the writer, and this is one of those; thanks for sharing yourself with us.

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