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by Joe Cramer

My submissions
of poetry
just become
conditions
of my life.
These emissions
come with so many
conditions,
conditions of rules,
of change
as it all does rearrange
in this life.
These submissions
have their own
relations
of elations
as the words
spring forth on a page.
I am wishing
that this submission
does not become
my condition.

07/31/2011

Posted on 07/31/2011
Copyright © 2026 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 07/31/11 at 11:43 PM

Me too! AND this made me think of that same song too....I love it! :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/01/11 at 12:53 PM

Clever use of repetition...word play. Fun read Joe!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 08/01/11 at 05:00 PM

Quite a departure from your other work. Loved the word play.

Posted by Laurie Blum on 08/01/11 at 06:27 PM

I have the same song playing in my head now! Great write Joe...so clever. I have been there too.

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