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soul shop

by Mary Frances Spencer

gotta drive in this one
electrical not firing
exhaust smoky
where can i go

need an alignment
steering off
suspension a bit
idle off

soul needs a tune up
recondition reconnection
paint job
detail wax please

what’s the price for
wires rotation
for integration
high vibration

somewhere along the path
i can find the right place to
roll down the windows
moon-roof open
breathe in the fresh night


Author's Note: Lots of body shops in my hood, nothin' for the soul! LOL!!! Namaste MFS

Posted on 07/27/2011
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 07/27/11 at 03:15 PM

Very nicely done MFS! I think we could all use a body shop or at least a tune up from time to time. Take care and good luck!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/28/11 at 10:03 PM

No doubt. Great work, and I dig that last stanza completely.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/29/11 at 12:08 AM

Excellent use of auto-imagery MF to deliver a highly efficient (firing on all cylinders) spiritual message.

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