by Mary Frances Spencer
gotta drive in this one
electrical not firing
where can i go
need an alignment
suspension a bit
soul needs a tune up
detail wax please
what’s the price for
somewhere along the path
i can find the right place to
roll down the windows
breathe in the fresh night
Author's Note: Lots of body shops in my hood, nothin' for the soul! LOL!!! Namaste MFS
Posted on 07/27/2011
Copyright © 2023 Mary Frances Spencer
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by George Hoerner on 07/27/11 at 03:15 PM|
Very nicely done MFS! I think we could all use a body shop or at least a tune up from time to time. Take care and good luck!
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/28/11 at 10:03 PM|
No doubt. Great work, and I dig that last stanza completely.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/29/11 at 12:08 AM|
Excellent use of auto-imagery MF to deliver a highly efficient (firing on all cylinders) spiritual message.