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soul shop
by Mary Frances Spencergotta drive in this one
electrical not firing
exhaust smoky
where can i go
need an alignment
steering off
suspension a bit
shaky
idle off
soul needs a tune up
recondition reconnection
paint job
detail wax please
what’s the price for
wires rotation
for integration
inhalation
high vibration
somewhere along the path
i can find the right place to
park
roll down the windows
moon-roof open
breathe in the fresh night
air
be
07/27/2011 Author's Note: Lots of body shops in my hood, nothin' for the soul! LOL!!! Namaste MFS
Posted on 07/27/2011
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/27/11 at 03:15 PM Very nicely done MFS! I think we could all use a body shop or at least a tune up from time to time. Take care and good luck! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/28/11 at 10:03 PM No doubt. Great work, and I dig that last stanza completely. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/29/11 at 12:08 AM Excellent use of auto-imagery MF to deliver a highly efficient (firing on all cylinders) spiritual message. |
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