| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/13/11 at 05:35 PM This is terrific! Thanks for the laugh (and, of course, I counted the syllables). |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/13/11 at 07:01 PM caught me and my abacus fair and square..... :) |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 07/13/11 at 10:35 PM (insert maniacal laugh here) |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/13/11 at 11:59 PM ...love linda fuller for countin' em, now i won't...and old master one of the [three that i know] of six trillion would love this, as i do. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/14/11 at 12:43 AM Probably. Good piece though. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/14/11 at 07:01 PM I don't know. I don't write Haiku. I think I liuke it, whatever it is. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/15/11 at 03:42 AM LMAO! Love it =)! Very, very awesome and clever. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/15/11 at 05:20 PM I truly loved this
though you didn't add nature
such fun, nonetheless |
| Posted by Gilly Wigley on 10/06/11 at 08:47 PM HAHAHAH! Love it! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/03/12 at 03:41 PM Gave me a great laugh!!! Love it! Of course I counted the syllables!!! I've never been good at following instructions but once I've gotten into the rut, like a three wheeling, 5-7-5, it's hard to pull me out of it!!! Truly, truly, I say unto you, it's not haiku, it's senryu!!! |
