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The Duck Egg Haiku Who Grew

by E. A. Pugh

joy
tight
joy
yolk
translucent calcium shell
fascia bine broken globe
clean smooth egg drip
firm hard yolk tight cells love orange
love orange
firm hard yolk
joy in the tight yolk
joy in the tight yolk
translucent calcium shell
clear mobile fluid
clean fluid forgives ripples
clear mobile fluid
translucent calcium shell
firm hard bust slice yolk
firm hard bust slice yolk
joy in the tight yolk
firm hard yolk
love orange
firm hard yolk tight cells love orange
clean smooth egg drip
fascia bine broken globe
translucent calcium shell
yolk
joy
tight
joy

06/21/2011

Posted on 06/21/2011
Copyright © 2024 E. A. Pugh

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jim Benz on 06/21/11 at 09:45 PM

"clean fluid forgives ripples" seems to be at the center of this poem, so to speak. I like it.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/22/11 at 02:59 PM

Cool.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/23/11 at 09:52 PM

Some weird, fascinating attention to word play and style here. The results are quite interesting and definitely entertaining.

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