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The Last- First Kiss
by Gregory R SchelskeI chased an ebony sunset
and on broken stones
behind a dusty veil
I tasted the sea
and danced upon her lips. 06/09/2011 Posted on 06/09/2011
Copyright © 2025 Gregory R Schelske
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/09/11 at 07:31 PM Very rich, and sweet. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/12/11 at 09:54 PM Gorgeous visuals. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/22/12 at 11:14 PM The contrasts in this piece are outstanding: the sea and the dust, the rocks and the veil, and the motion of chasing and dancing make this piece visually stimulating and tactile. Good read. |
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