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Saturday Market on a Cold Memorable Day

by Kristina Woodhill

Tasted, tested, tallied
dried pears, tooth-pick poked,
dried plums, divine.
Lemonade guys,
come on, it's cold,
cold, cold outside,
memorial weekend
on the midcity
market streets;
Saturday stocked,
Sunday will have to
fill its own pews.
The man on the corner
still holds the Black Book
firmly,
quoting,
standing
on a little box -
does “up” above us in inches
elevate his words by blocks?
Steve, your native
plants rise up!
Sturdy stems
striving, no threats
needed, it's thyme
for my annual rosemary,
beads of oil rub
me the right way,
clearing sinus
passages for curry leaves'
temptation, but I'm leaning
toward India tea,
if you please,
Darjeeling, I do not
find you here, love,
for this is Idaho
where the elk and
buffalo roam,
corralled and lovingly
steaked out
on more than a few
bar-be-ques,
and the local honey mustard
bees play
and play
all day

05/28/2011

Posted on 05/29/2011
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 05/29/11 at 01:47 AM

This is a wonderful Memorial Day poem lady. Well done!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/29/11 at 05:54 AM

This is definitely a Memorial Day treat!! But especially liked "Sunday will have to fill its own pews"!!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 05/29/11 at 01:54 PM

I enjoyed the sensations evoked from reading this marvelous work! Thanks! :)

Posted by David Hill on 05/30/11 at 01:32 AM

Lots of interesting details, as always in your work. I like the elevated preacher and the playfulness with the spices, and the honey mustard bees. I like steaked out. There is an underlying brutality in that. There is a nice balance in your subjects here.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/30/11 at 05:48 AM

I love the sense of strolling and looking through a market searching for delights locality a chill still in the climate and yet so lovely in word choice. smh

Posted by Ariane Scott on 08/10/11 at 01:56 PM

Fabulous sounds and syntax. The strong images coupled with the evocative make this piece delectable. **slurp**

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