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Slack

by Clara Mae Gregory

I see the humpback
with a weighted sack
Walking on the roadside
where none will stop
or even dare ask,
"Do you need a ride?"

05/13/2011

Posted on 05/13/2011
Copyright © 2026 Clara Mae Gregory

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sam Richmond on 05/13/11 at 02:44 PM

When we look with compassion we are able to see past our own indulgence. Wonderful introspect Clara. I don't know where the rating utility went, but if it comes back I will revisit.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/29/11 at 10:52 PM

Great opening for a movie. Definitely has that visual and verbal angle.

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