bet you didn't know you were killing me

by Genevieve Sturrock

i didn't realize i was suffocating
until i saw your shadow move
and suddenly
i could breathe again


Posted on 05/02/2011
Copyright © 2020 Genevieve Sturrock

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Julie Adams on 05/25/11 at 01:19 AM

I like the dominant imagery of the shadow suffocating, such a great image, takes me back to the likes of the shadows in the movie Ghost...kudos, peace, jewels

Posted by Julie Adams on 05/25/11 at 01:20 AM

(clarification: I meant the shadow suffocating you)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/11 at 06:39 PM

The intensity of no longer wanted relationship well expressed.

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