| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/25/11 at 10:52 PM ...chris, this one is easy to dance to; i love the choice of verbal landscaping on this one, i stayed on for the full eight seconds. great write. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/26/11 at 11:32 PM Great pictures, but they don't even come close to touching how awesome the words are. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 04/27/11 at 04:08 AM Love the gliding rhythm here. Lovely piece. |
| Posted by A. Reed on 05/04/11 at 03:28 AM It always seems a puzzle long after it is gone what really went wrong, and the imagery of your words was phenomenal...I had a brush dusting the end of every letter. Well done. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 05/05/11 at 12:49 AM I love the flow and consistency here...the images add the thousand needed words they always bring along...the "package" gives me a solid view of the poems very intent voice. Delighted, and thanks. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/05/11 at 02:12 PM the last four lines especially blew me away chris! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/06/11 at 09:08 PM REALLY lovely pice. The pictures ernhanced the words- thank you! |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 05/10/11 at 03:23 AM I love this, a canyon where love's residue will ever paint the rocks, kudos |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/11/11 at 09:51 PM Like a fine wine, the longer it takes to read this, the better it gets. |
| Posted by Peter Marinelli on 05/14/11 at 09:59 PM Chris, This is an extraordinarily evocative work! The imagery is akin to stop-motion down the ages! I feel haunted at a visceral level - I think because I can relate so well to the tone and theme of your work here. Lovely!! |
