Hyacinth fragrance Graceful glory of Gods will Green green abundant earth I am sticks and green I keep my flowers unseen I rustle in wind Spring water fills me Frogs speak to lovers in me Summers heat dries me Worms on the sidewalk Hermaphrodite went to far Looking for a mate Plant cutting takes root. Humanity roots in love, or at least it should.
04/08/2011
That second stanza is my favorite by far. It's just a weird, wonderful image.
My fav is Stanza 3.
Dear E.A.; Your 5 haiku is ever so well done. Each verse compliments the others. I've tried the form many times, never with half the success that you have exhibited here. Just beautiful. Sam