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Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 03/15/11 at 11:51 PM This is my Divind Wind. Excellent,Kee. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/16/11 at 12:49 AM Divine Wind - very interesting reading about this concept there. The last stanza does not seem needed here, given that very strong stanza before it with the repetition of the word "Power". This is a thought provoking piece. |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/16/11 at 02:02 PM Well, nature's power does one thing for sure - it makes quick work of our arrogance and reminds us how small we are in the scheme of it all. Who among us is not drastically humbled by such immense forces? I enjoyed reading this very much! |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/18/11 at 09:34 PM Excellent work, sir. I love every shot of imagery in this. |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/26/11 at 01:26 PM and despite it all, we as a people will probably continue to be as arrogant as ever. excellent capture here! |
Posted by Shawnacy Perez on 06/04/11 at 04:28 PM a lovely and powerful tribute to Japan. beautiful work. banzai delicacy... such a phrase.
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