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how fragile we are
by Maria Terezia FerenczAnd we
we washed ashore
like so many sea shells
empty forlorn
And we
we finally saw
like so many blind men
how fragile we are 03/15/2011
Author's Note: Just a thought.
Posted on 03/15/2011
Copyright © 2026 Maria Terezia Ferencz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 03/15/11 at 01:34 PM Talk about being on the edge of the abyss, another fine write lady. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 03/16/11 at 01:19 AM Maria, I am a person of the Sea...so, naturally...
I love this metaphorical imagery
I love it.....crumbled what once was whole |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/19/11 at 04:48 PM ...while looking for one of your wonderful pomes, i saw this one. a thought is a bud, and we watched it bloom in these words...one of those 'thank you' for writing this pomes. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/12/11 at 11:14 PM Love the comparisons...analogy here. Pretty dang good for just a thought...more an epiphany in my book. |
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