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Promises of Someday

by Austin Halling-Rowe

My river is dead now...
A river must have its rain,
And promises of someday
Cannot wash the freestone wall
So like tears to a river i fall

01/23/2011

Author's Note: For Terry...the tears were hers

Posted on 01/24/2011
Copyright © 2025 Austin Halling-Rowe

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Julie Adams on 02/16/11 at 03:09 AM

The flow, the syntax (esp. the last line), it all left me completely absorbed! Bravo! Peace, jewels

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